- it's talking about the process of losing a tooth.
- a boat attaching by cable or rope to the shore or to the anchor
3. I took this information and interpreted it the child had lost his tooth which made him appear younger like Lazarus
IDENTIFYING THE 'POINT OF CHANGE'
The tooth poem
IDENTIFYING THE 'POINT OF CHANGE'
- the first point of change- "your jaw leaves an alveolus" stanza 4
- stanza 3
- the second point of change - " but only when your sleep do I discover a tooth" stanza 6
- line 20
- the atmosphere in the first 3 stanza's- the atmosphere is light and fun and almost carefree imitating what a child would feel in the moment
- float,
- the atmosphere of 4-6 - panic and pain
- your eyes collect water, your gums are an ocean of blood
- metaphor- the tooth's a boat
- listing- shells, starfish, pipi, and paua
- adjective- as I stoke you
- simile- you're eleven teeth old and have grown like Lazarus
- personal pronouns- I discover a tooth
- simile- you're eleven teeth old and have grown like Lazarus - it makes the audience picture the image clearer.
- personal pronouns - you're - it directly addresses the child
- listing - shells, starfish, pipi, paua - makes their evening sound eventfull
- they are being compared to the blood from his mouth and the teeth itself
- this helps the reader understand the poem better and get clear imagery because the references are familiar
The tooth poem
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