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Tuesday, 23 July 2019

Section 3 booklet- At ten years old

ANSWER TO QUESTIONS

At ten years old- Poem

Scooter- kids toy 
Intricate- detailed or very complicated 
Fete- a public function typically held outdoors and organised to raise funds for charity 
Incomprehensible- not able to be understood 
Estimate- roughly calculated or extend of 
Recruited- enlist someone in the armed forces 
Invaluable- extremely useful 
Denied- refuse to give something or refuse to admit something
Campaign- an organised course of action to achieve a goal 

My Predictions
I think that the piece might be about describing someone or something when they were a child, as a significant moment that happened that was memorable and maybe they were going through memories that had and impact on them

2 memories when I was ten
I remember that my dad once bought a life-size doll and scared my mother with it after they watched a horror movie
I also remember how we discovered a snake in our house

I think this piece might include the joys of growing up and how the world is seen by a ten-year-old

Now I think this piece might be about how a ten-year-old see the world and experiences it because the information I have gathered seems to be pointing in that direction

maybe how the world has changed from the good old days when she was carefree

The main purpose of the speech might be letting people know how much everything has changed and how it might not all be for the best

The speaker wants us to donate to the child soldiers international and support them to stop the recruitment of children for war


  • how Juliet had to prepare for war by painting her face while other kids her age were getting face paints 
  • How music to Juliet was drum beats marching them into war and not like a normal 10-year-old listening to music and dancing in their bedrooms 
  • Juliet was a child who was denied her childhood and about 300,000 other children were also taken to war against their will 
  • donate to the campaign and give these children their childhood back 
summary 
This piece is about a young girl named Juliet who was taken from her home and made to fight in the war and how it is estimated that about 300,000 other children are suffering the same fate. This poem is giving awareness and asking people to help make a difference 

The writer/speaker wanted to teach us about how what was going on that we couldn't see because it is unfair that these innocent children were made to give up their lives to fight in the war

  • personal pronouns- It makes it sound like a realistic experience and when the reader is reading this it makes it sound like this happened to them- At 10 years old I remember having my face painted- As readers see this it immediately brings them into the picture 
  • Listing- listing down things to show how much Juliet missed- play-fighting with boys at school, water fights, water balloons and laughter/ real fighting, grenades and silence of death- the reader is clearly shown the differences of Juliet's childhood and a normal child's childhood
  • repetition- to draw attention to the word/phrase- at ten years old- it is showing that Juliet was only 10 and this was happening to her 

Personal pronouns- e.g at ten years old MY trips, I remember the music

The speaker's attitude towards children going to war is not good. We see this attitude when the speaker uses repetition. She is constantly stressing the fact that this child was only 10 and how her childhood was taken from her. This is proven when she says "at ten years old my days were filled with trips down to our local beach""at ten years old Juliet was taken against her will""Juliet was a child who was denied her childhood". The point of this is to emphasise her point which is that this is happening and it shouldn't be.  The speaker's overall purpose is to spread awareness on this topic and to help stop it.
Another way this attitude is shown is when she uses the technique listing. Which we see in the line "Juliet was taken away against her will, from her family, her friends, her education, school and community". From this, we learn that this ten-year-old has lost so much of her freedom because she was taken to war. It makes us think about how this is a serious issue and how this 10-year-old shouldn't be forced into that life. Finally, the author wanted us to remember/act/learn that these children are being taken against their will and made to fight in the war when they should be living their childhood. Because no child especially as young as 10 deserves to be living this life. Just like in the text when our character Julie is taken away when she should be living her life.  



  










   

Monday, 22 July 2019

poems

How to eat a poem?   
by Eve Merriam

Eating poetry
by Mark Strand 

Unfolding bud 
by Naoshi Koriyama 

what do these poems suggest the way we should approach poetry?
- to enjoy a poem like you would a good meal and to "eat" it 
- to be careless and wild with it, like if a dog were to have eaten it 
- to see the deeper meaning and wait for it to unfold itself
http://drshew.weebly.com/uploads/4/1/3/6/41362521/whatisapoemexamples.pdf

what is one specific example?
- "don't be polite, bite in"
- "there was no happiness like mine, I had been eating poetry"
- " to see the poem gradually unfolding, revealing it's rich inner self"

collage

Friday, 5 July 2019

unfamiliar texts - tooth poem


  1. it's talking about the process of losing a tooth.

- alveolus- the bony socket for the root of your teeth.
- a boat attaching by cable or rope to the shore or to the anchor 

 3. I took this information and interpreted it the child had lost his tooth which made him appear younger like Lazarus

IDENTIFYING THE 'POINT OF CHANGE'


  • the first point of change- "your jaw leaves an alveolus" stanza 4
  • stanza 3
  • the second point of change - " but only when your sleep do I discover a tooth" stanza 6 
  • line 20
  • the atmosphere in the first 3 stanza's- the atmosphere is light and fun and almost carefree imitating what a child would feel in the moment 
  • float, 
  • the atmosphere of 4-6 - panic and pain
  • your eyes collect water, your gums are an ocean of blood


  • metaphor- the tooth's a boat 
  • listing- shells, starfish, pipi, and paua
  • adjective- as I stoke you 
  • simile- you're eleven teeth old and have grown like Lazarus
  • personal pronouns- I discover a tooth  


  • simile- you're eleven teeth old and have grown like Lazarus - it makes the audience picture the image clearer.
  • personal pronouns - you're - it directly addresses the child
  • listing - shells, starfish, pipi, paua - makes their evening sound eventfull 


  • they are being compared to the blood from his mouth and the teeth itself 
  • this helps the reader understand the poem better and get clear imagery because the references are familiar 


The tooth poem





Wednesday, 12 June 2019

Advice on how to get an E8

 Advice on how to get an E8 on your exam

  • It's not about the what's but about the how's and why's. Instead of pointing out the language features, talk about how it makes you feel and why it makes you feel that.                                                                                                                                                     
  • Appreciation of the text. go into detail about the emotional effect and how you relate to the text personally.

  • Authors purpose, talk about how the author might've had some sort of experience that was incorporated into his/her work.




Friday, 15 February 2019

continuing the image description



Big Sur by Jack Kerouac
This novel is directly based on Kerouac’s own experiences in Big Sur, where he went to escape the fast-paced lifestyle of the city. Protagonist Jack Duluoz doesn’t enjoy being in the limelight, and is able to find peace—however temporarily—in this mountainous, coastal region.

From the book:
On soft Spring nights I’ll stand in the yard under the stars — Something good will come out of all things yet — And it will be golden and eternal just like that — There’s no need to say another word.


"I have always adored the breeze the spring season brings. The way she dances with my hair as if displaying an elegant waltz fused together with aggressive tango. As I'm standing here feeling every inch of the image. I feel like a painter breathing in the image before putting paint to paper. From the mountains that sit heavy above the land dipping her feet into the ocean. Right down to where the sea greets the shore, inviting him to a date but never responding. Touching but not feelings.